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Mark Herder
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Chaos Theory As Applied to Love, Baseball, and the Rest of the Universe
Mark Herder, author
Chaos theory suggests that the flapping of a butterfly’s wings in China can produce a tornado on the other side of the world. If that is true, how could the effects of first love be any less devastating? Chaos Theory as Applied to Love, Baseball, and the Rest of the Universe examines life's most elemental forces: love, death, religion, and, of course, baseball. Raised in a family of eccentric losers, George Seibenmann has only one ambition: to pitch for his high school baseball team. Ruth Hannon, on the other hand, is a young woman possessed of never ending hope, grounded faith, and a deadly fastball. When she breaks the gender barrier and becomes the team's starting pitcher, George senses a change in the wind – not only for the team but for himself as well. Ruth's older brother coaches the team from a wheelchair. Though paralyzed from the waist down, he has the determination and skill to lead the team "all the way to State." The team's remarkable string of victories causes a sensation in this most hopeless of small towns – until a sudden and incomprehensible tragedy strikes. But, as defeat looms, George experiences a revelation of amazing grace – one impossibly suspended moment in time that will change the course of everyone’s life.
Plot/Idea: 9 out of 10
Originality: 8 out of 10
Prose: 9 out of 10
Character/Execution: 9 out of 10
Overall: 8.75 out of 10

Assessment:

Plot: Herder belts it out of the literary ballpark with this solid novel, covering all the standard YA bases: an insecure teen narrator, sexist jocks, small-town sports rivalries, unrequited young love, a barrier-breaking girl, and the devastation of suicide.

Prose: The author's prose captures the interactions of his characters with admirable fidelity to the tone of teens; though the novel is pitched to young readers, the writing is mature enough for adults, enlivened by frequent wit.

Originality: Herder offers up an original tale of gender-barrier busting on the baseball field and adolescent high school cliques off the field.

Character Development: George and Ruth—competing as starting pitchers—are well-rounded, multi-dimensional central characters. The large cast of teammates, schoolmates, and townspeople are equally well-developed.

Blurb: Set in the world of small-town high school baseball, this is pitch-perfect storytelling.

Date Submitted: July 18, 2018

Reviews
Kirkus Reviews

In Herder’s fine new novel, tension flares on the Freiburg High School baseball team when a girl becomes the starting pitcher.

This charming, fun novel features a cast of eccentric Missourians and centers on two pitchers—hapless George Seibenmann and feisty Ruth Hannon. George’s family is a bunch of overweight ne’er-do-wells, but George is bright and ambitious, applying to Caltech to study physics and wanting to, as Theodore Roosevelt said, “dare mighty things.” Ruth chops off her “famous” long hair after it causes problems on the field at her first practice, but the enigmatic young woman proves that she’s a force to be reckoned with when she nearly strikes out the team’s best hitter. However, George must reckon with another force: chaos, which reigns throughout the story, as small gestures have huge effects, and thoughtless deeds have unintended consequences. The Seibenmann family members’ lives have always been dictated by forces beyond their control—bad economies, Parkinson’s disease, war. George’s life swirls with the chaos of college admissions, baseball season—and his love for Ruth. His struggle drives this novel forward, but Ruth never quite comes into clear focus, even as some of the minor characters do. Her presence looms large, but her personality remains vague; as a result, readers may have difficulty relating to George’s attraction to her, aside from the fact that she’s a good-looking, talented female and he’s a red-blooded American male. Otherwise, this is a complex, self-aware book; for example, at church, George thinks, “This was a high school baseball game between two rinky-dink towns. No one else cared, not even in the next county. Certainly, Almighty God had issues of more pressing concern.” But soon, even he gets swept up in the fervor, singing the “Battle Hymn of the Republic” and chanting “All the way to State!” It’s a beautifully scaled moment, typical of the novel, which, like its protagonist, is smart and full of feeling.

A funny, poignant novel that shows how baseball and love exist in a realm beyond reason.

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